Thursday, March 15, 2007

Poem-revisited and revised

For my 50th blog I had written one poem (see portion below the line) as an ode to friendship. In view of some comments I've rewritten it and hopefully its a better attempt. :-)

I was strolling alone down a road
When someone came and started walking with me
Turning the long distance into a beautiful journey

I was sitting quietly by myself
When someone came and sat next to me
Not anymore I found spending time a difficulty

I was feeling sad one day
When someone came and gave me what I most needed
A big bear hug and a warm smile along with it

I was on seventh heaven another time
When someone came and listened to my secret
Promising forever in the heart to keep it

"Who is this I always find beside me?" I asked Him
Came back the answer "A True Friend"

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This is my 50th post on my blog!!! So I decided to make it special by penning a few lines for all those special people in my life.... my friends. :)

Here goes:

I was quiet and I was shy
My friends came along and asked me why
They made me talk and heard what I had to say
Where would I have been without them today?

I was sitting all alone amidst strangers
My friends came along and everything became familiar
They made me laugh and teased me
Where would I have been without their company?

I was over the moon with exultation
My friends came along and joined in the jubilation
They thumped my back and celeberated my triumph
Where would I have been without their enthusiasm?

I was walking down a road heavy burdened
My friends came along and my troubles lessened
They gave me strength and gave me comfort
Nowhere would I be without their support

9 comments:

Unknown said...

see, I did so much for you ....now I need my dost-dakshina!!

Anonymous said...

hmm.. i didn't knw I was doing all that :) hehe. Nevetheless, genuine attempt, but not very impressive as far as the presentation goes.

Rajeev said...

touched..gr8 memory of past days...

Tuhina Adit Maark said...

@ Manish: Dost-dakshina chahiye!! Hmmm... ask what you want. Not that you'll actually get it. Hehehe

@ Hitesh: I sent you the email by mistake. :D Btw what do you mean by improving the presentation?

@ Rajeev: Tanku!

Anonymous said...

well,
I beleive I have not been so supporter,but I am sure you never forget me baby!!!!!!!!!!;)))))))))))))
god,what happend to my investigation???!!!!

Anonymous said...

Secret, as I see it, is not right/
Why not bring it on to the broad daylight?/
It's not fair to to the ones /
Whom you call to be friends./
My rant's about the second to last/
Where you hid the secret very fast!

^_^

Tuhina Adit Maark said...

kousik... i guess you didn't get it right. the secret was told to a friend only to be locked up in his/her heart. ;)

Sigma said...

Nice poem!! And wonderful blog!

Tuhina Adit Maark said...

@sigma: thanks a lot! hope to get more comments from you.